ahhh, yes. more concretism. i love flow charts. and i love pocket-sized notebooks.
this one gives a sense of incredible disorder to a device that's meant to explain, illustrate, and organize. arrows pointing off the page/coming from off the page: good idea, suggesting something absent, calling attention to what we can see on this page. it's a visual feast as well. it's fun to look at, but difficult to sit down and read it all together. but i guess that's the problem with word collages. intelligently devised word combinations look random and unintentional beside one another. good parataxis in a primitive form, makes me think about bored, in-class doodles in a different way.
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ahhh, yes.
more concretism.
i love flow charts. and i love pocket-sized notebooks.
this one gives a sense of incredible disorder to a device that's meant to explain, illustrate, and organize. arrows pointing off the page/coming from off the page: good idea, suggesting something absent, calling attention to what we can see on this page. it's a visual feast as well. it's fun to look at, but difficult to sit down and read it all together. but i guess that's the problem with word collages. intelligently devised word combinations look random and unintentional beside one another. good parataxis in a primitive form, makes me think about bored, in-class doodles in a different way.
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